The expression on the girl's face was what first caught my eye, you've portrayed it such a beautifully accurate way! Also, I love how graceful their hair looks. I think it's great that you indicated atmosphere and setting more through the characters and their body language rather than create an elaborate background. The simple background really does help highlight the interesting character design
Thanks for doing it! CX and yeah, I did. >.< Just forgot to respond cause I looked at the note while I was busy and forgot to respond. Haha. I think I can do Fridays after 6:30.